https://youtu.be/Zekpb-530fg
I did not have any comments on my last video, so I did not change anything based off of that when I recorded my elevator pitch this time around. However, I do think that I tried to make it a little bit more upbeat. I struggle with not being monotone whenever I speak (even when I took my public speaking class), and I noticed that I did not have very much variety in my tone with the last attempt. This time around I tried to vary my tone throughout the recording, and I think that the result came out much better. I did also have the pitch almost memorized this time around which I think significantly helped me. It also took me about half the time to record as when I did the first pitch because I felt much less awkward. Overall, I think that these exercises have helped my confidence with speaking in front of the camera a lot!
Hi Arielle,
ReplyDeleteI think you have a great pitch. I like how your pitch flowed and you spoke clearly. You started with a great hook that drew in my attention and made me want to hear more. I also liked how you used a lot of adjectives like "revolutionary". This really added character to your pitch and made it interesting to listen to. Great job!